She Foo Fights!

First Impression (5 points): [What do I like and not like at first sight? Does it look interesting?]Okay, at first sight I see this layout as being a little bit to one side, kinda skattered looking, but as your eyes ajust and you scroll down you can relax into the pretty color theme, and take a moment to look at the picture. We have here a girl who looks like she's using all her effort, like she's really into what she's doing; this could be a self image here? Or, maybe just something that looks neat to the eye? [3/5]

Title (5 points): [Does it correspond with your diary? Is it unigue or plain?]
Your title at first seems kinda childish, but cute at the same time; it gives off a sense of how you view yourself. [4/5]

Mistakes (5 points): [These points may or may not be knocked off for spelling, grammer, html errors, or broken links.]
Alright, the only mistake I saw was that the notes link still leads to the notes of the design, and I think I saw all of one forgivable spelling mistake - no big deal. :) [4/5]

Updates (5 points): [Do you update once a week, once a day, or hardly ever? Or is it scattered? Schedualed entries, or at least often entries are important!] Entries are a little skattered, but they are no huge gaps, a few days isn't bad - I mean, we all have a life after all, however 3 or 4 entries in one day is a bit much. :( [2/5]

Arcive Page (10 points): [Does it exsist? Does it link? Is it messy? Does it have the same layout, or a different layout?] Since your diary only has 44 entries so far a complicated arcive page is not needed yet. All the entries are in one long list in the same format as your diary. The only thing about this I would improve is that the titles of your entries are sometimes long, and sometimes short, and some take up two lines making the page look a little messy; otherwise, just fine. [9/10]

Style (10 points): [This will be based on; do you put your poetry or songs in your diary? Or do you put pictures you like in your diary? Or is there neat music playing? Do you use made up words, and jokes in your entries? If you said yes to any, most or some of those, expect a good score] Well, as I said before, you diary is still relitivly new, but their is a Survey in it, and a song you wrote. There could definatly be more - but the little details you have so far chosen to include are fine. [5/10]

Layout (25 points): [Layouts are often underrated; but a beautiful, simple or complex layout to match your tone of writting is a beautiful catching element to a wonderful diary. Things like borders, pictures, color schme, and arrangment will add up to these points.] I like the layout personally, however I don't think I'd use it for my own diary (I liked your old one better) - There is one thing about it that I find interesting, but at the same time, a little buggy - and that is the fact that your scrollbar is pink and everything else is purple. It's this neat thing that sets everything off and at the same time, is wondered as a mistake? Well, it does match the text at the top. It's different... :) Something with a bit more to it might be nice - it seems somehow like your words are lost in the big expanse. [18/25]

Content (35 points): [Here I'll be looking at your vocabulary, sentense structure, character, creativness, appeal, expression of feelings and completion of thoughts.] You come off as another girl out there with her own set of problems, much like everyone else. Your writing is explanitory, but somehow you don't make yourself seem special - you seem to lack in your writting some particular "grab" that would pull a person to your writing; On the flip side, someone might like the fact that you don't seem like your trying to hard to impress someone with big words or fancy terms. [26/35]

Total (100 points): [79/100] Overall; iteresting, but not quite juicy enough for someone like me to get into.

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